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Review:brad says:
(tracked you over here from Portkey. I trust you're in the act of publishing this final chapter over there?)

Well, I see the punch line of the whole story now. :-)

The "I must not tell lies" script on the device was a good, clever touch; very fitting. As was Hermione's final words. And word. :-)

Umbridge was still too stupid, but I guess you could only use what Rowling provided.

Marietta's rejoining the DA was nicely done - you have a flair for theatrical language - although I thought that would include Hermione's cancelling the acne hex on her. Maybe Marietta's 'SNEAK' pimples weren't permanent in your story?

Author's Response: The story on Portkey is a bit different, but the main part of the story is still the same.

From canon, I saw nothing from Umbridge that led me to think anything about her but being a petty bureaucrat who worked her way into a position where she could flourish under the protection of her patrons and torment those under her. I've read a few stories with the evil mastermind Umbridge, and while I liked them, I just never saw her as that.

I always envisioned Marietta's punishment as something temporary. If she could manage to go a month without tattling on anyone it would fade, if not it would start the count all over again (or something like that) but there was never a place to work an explanation in.

thanks for taking the time to read and leave a review. I really appreciate your comments

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