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Review:Browneyes101 says:
Here I am as requested. :)

I would just like to say how sorry I am for making you wait so long, but with my exams and the hoildays everythings just been everywhere. I'm only going to review this one chapter, I know that in my rules it says that I review three if you have three or more but I really have to get caught up with reviews, but you are more than welcome to come back when I have slots open. Now on with the review!

I really liked the characters in this chapter. They have great personality and are well described. As I read I noticed that you put great detail around the characters and in them, I love detail and I've noticed that not a lot of people here really don't show any minor detail, and when you did it just made my day. The descriptions are also amazing, I really love them.

I do think that it was a little fast toward the end. Kinda like you got a little too excited toward the end when you were clos to finishing. Does that make any sense? My advice is to slow toward the end.

Hope I helped.9/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, and sorry I took so long to reply.

Thanks! Johanna's a little strange, I know, but I'm glad you liked her. I've been writing original fiction for a long time, so maybe that's why I have more detail... I didn't really notice.

I don't really know what you mean, but I'll look over that and try and fix it if I see it happening again.

Thanks again for the lekker review!

♥-Ai

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