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Review:bexi_potter says:
AHH!! I was so excited when I saw this was up!

Well, I was on the inside because on the outside I'm a flu-ridden wreck and can't really show any sort of emotion that involves moving.

I managed a weak yay though :)

Moving on. I loved this chapter. I loved the first part. I love the way you write so in character, how she comes to her own conclusions based on her own thoughts and how her thoughts influence her actions. It's a great talent, you should be proud :) Because some people write it like and then i did this and then i did that and it's not very...flow-y, you know? Your story has good flow. I like good flow.

Anyway. Lol.

I loved this line: "After a moment of hesitation, I left my fist fall forward and... missed the door by a few inches."


And I love how she notices she's in her pyjamas but doesn't actually do anything about it. She's very unique :)

I can't believe this is the second-to-last chapter! I can't wait for the next one, but then again I don't want the story to end. My mind is like, so conflicted lol.

Amazing writing again. Definitely 10/10. You made a poor sick girl very happy, be proud :D



Author's Response: Ah, Becky!

I'm sorry to hear that you are sick, m'dear! I am, however, happy to hear that you are enjoying my flow-y-ness and whatnot. xD

Hope you feel better, love!

Thanks for the review!

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