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Review:SpringTime says:
Poor poor Gavin, though I know it had to happen it is too bad because he was so nice (maybe that was the problem, nice guys finish last, right?)
I wonder what his reaction will be when they do see each other again. You have built up a very nice story here and I am enjoying the read.
The main things that I suggest as I have said earlier would be to work out the tense issues and the timeline and little details to make sure that it is all cohesive.
I hope that these reviews helped and feel free to come back for more when you update again.

Author's Response: Yes, I felt terrible about that, but it was bound to happen. Lol, maybe if he had known about Irene's feelings about Charlie, he would have fought harder for her heart. =)

You have been a tremendous help! I am fixing up the mistakes as we speak and they should be up once I get them to my beta. Thank you so much!


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