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Review:SpringTime says:
I really like the lab and the way that you had them name and choose the egg... I will mention that it seemed like an afterthougth that you had them get an egg instead of a dragon after it had hatched. You also said that Lisa had never seen a dragon but she just had the lesson before hadnt she? Also I thought the eggs were all from that one dragon? They are minor things, but to make this story as good as I know it can be you should straighten them out so as not to deter people from reading it, because it really has been enjoyable to read.
There are still some tense issues and some typo's that you should sort out.
Otherwise it is a good chapter and the dragon lore, or whatever it should be called, I think you have down pretty well. It does sound believeable as if you had once raised a dragon yourself. :0)

Author's Response: *sighs* This is why I should learn to plan and be more patient about posting. I will definitely clear up all the confusions once I finish working on the timeline. Thank you again! I'm glad you're still reading despite the mistakes. =D Lol, thank you again for the review, SpringTime!

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