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Review:SpringTime says:
The dragon information did seem resonable. There were a couple of typo's here and there, you might want to do a quick read through, but you should be able to spot them easily enough.
I am wondering what the professor meant by cheating? Not sure how you could cheat on this project, but maybe it will be explained later.
I like how you show her relationship to her father and it's layers. I think a bit more work on the memory would help to improve that even more, just some more detail, maybe some more showing instead of telling.
I look forward to reading on (especially as there seems to be a party!)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am currently working with a beta. She's doing this chapter right now. =)

Ah yes, I should have clarified that. What he meant was the students can't pretend to forget to pick up their dragons from the Infirmary or bribe a senior to do most of the work for them. It seems rather impossible, but he was just being cautious in case anyone felt like being creative. =P Thank you, I'll definitely clear that up once I get the chapter back. ^_^

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