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Review:Groundswell says:
What a great first chapter! I really like it. You have found a very good line between dialogue and description which I find close to perfect! I loved the - I don't know, what was it? A prologue? Well, I loved it! It was so sweet, and definitely made me want more!
I like the whole scene in the library, even though I do not see someone interupting when others are talking. Gossip people would keep quiet till they'd heard something very juicy.
A really fantastic first chapter, I really loved it!
Oh, and I just realised as I made this a favourite of mine, that it's the third of your stories I've done so with. Haha.

Author's Response: Thanks, Groundswell! :D Close to perfect? That makes me extremely happy. I'm always a little unsure about the line between dialogue and description, and therefore it's great that you think it was good. ^_^ Yeah, you're probably right about the interrupting part. The girl who did interrupt wasn't the gossip queen, though, she was just a little stupid. :P Thank you for this wonderful review. In fact, thank you for all of your wonderful reviews! :) It means the world to me that you read and review my stories.

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