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Review:Foxtrott says:
Hi! I'm really sorry about taking so long to review, I've been trying to get the fifth chapter of Discretion out, and right now it's sent for validation, so... here I am! :)

Oh, sorry about the skimpy review on the previous chapter. It's just that when I'm not in reviewer-from-forum mode, I tend to just harp on how good a story is. :| Sorry, I'm weird that way.

I thought this chapter was pretty good. Nice flow, easy to follow, and I really liked this line: He insulted my favourite pair of sweat pants. Heheheh, nice touch of humour! :D

Oh, and I'm really glad that Oliver said that last line, because when I read the whole, "You look nice." thing, I was like, uh oh. It was a bit OOC for him, but the last line saved him. :)

Just wondering... why was Cho guessing that Cody liked Oliver?

Author's Response: Hehe, glad you liked the touch of humour - it's reassuring to know that that aspect of the story is coming across. Phew - good thing that last line was there then! ;)

Oh haha, yeah that's not the first time someone asked that either, so I guess I probably should've made it more clear. She was just teasing Cody for fun, not really with a motive necessarily, but you know how it gets when two of your friends meet, and there's just that urge to tease, like "oh, you like so-and-so," type of motif. :) Thanks for the feedback!


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