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Review:Sunflower says:
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You have some grammar mistakes here and there in the story, one is this: in the short summary of the chapter-thingy: loose is lose.

- He was the boy who was your first kiss, most likely in a game of truth-or-dare. He would be the type of kid who would take you to the school balls or dances if you didnít have a date. He would dance to your favorite songs. He was the best friend you had ever dreamed of. He was omnipresence in your life, wasnít he, and I bet that you couldnít ever think of life without him. -WOW!! amazing... absolutely breathtaking. I adored that part. so heartfelt, and so so sad. Beautiful.

The way you write captures the reader and makes us want to read on, very well done!

It was a very well written chapter, I loved it all and youve got me hooked. Cant wait to read the next!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm so glad you liked it :)

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