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Review:Foxtrott says:
I thought this chapter was pretty well-done, and your descriptions and dialogue did establish good characterisation for the characters.

This part was slightly oxymoronic though, and it sounded odd, "they /kicked Hermione out/, /kindly/ promising to inform her..."
Just an opinion.

Other than that, this chapter was good. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! *HUGS*

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