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Review:Foxtrott says:
Hi there. I'm here from the forum, and I'm sorry if it's taken a while for me to get to you.

Well, like everyone else, I find Hermione/Sirius a bit unbelievable, but that's the beauty of fanon, I guess. I've never seen Sirius as someone who only does flings, but hey, I've only read a few Sirius romance fics.

I thought the beginning was a rather good way to entice readers to read on. And the ending was rather impactful. I like single-sentence endings, and that's how I end stories sometimes too.

The paragraph of Sirius' thoughts was a bit... well, forced. Because one moment he's flipping mad, with little sensitivity for Hermione, and then another moment he's reflecting, and extremely sensitive again.

All-right, to the next chapter I go. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, even if you don't like Sirimione's lol... *HUGS*

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