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Review:Browneyes101 says:
I'm back! :)

I loved this chapter, I'm really starting to fall in love with Hayden. He is such a gentleman that's it's hard not to love him; I've always wanted a gentlemanly boyfriend, they're so hard to find nowadays.

Their was only one thing that I saw that needs fixing:

"He suddenly wished he were Cupid that he could shoot an arrow through the hearts of his mum and dad and so co-join them and cause them have true and requited love."

You should have a comma between Cupid and that and a to inbetween them and have.

Once again, this was beautiful! Please come back and request more I want to see how this ends.

Hope I helped. 10/10

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