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Review:Browneyes101 says:
I'm here once again. :)

Another beautiful chapter, I'm just in awe. Seriously. Now, lets get down to the evil, nasty stuff so that we can get to the good stuff. Alright here goes!

I saw some grammar mistakes toward the end, I don't know rather you were excited that you were finally getting the chapter done, or if you were in a rush, but whatever is was, it shows. I suggest that you slow down a bit and not rush into things, take your time. But lets not be as slow as Christmas, alright (pun intended).

Now here comes the fun part, the good stuff! This chapter was just like the last one: beautifully written with a lot of passion in it. I could feel the emotion that you were trying to bring out, I could see the setting, see the pictures in my head. That's a good thing, tells me everything ran smoothly.

On to chapter three! Hope I helped. 9/10

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