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Review:Browneyes101 says:
Here I am just as you requested. :)

I just have to say that this is an amazing chapter! Your describtion is absoutly brillant. I really have no feedback on this accpet, keep up the good work. If their was ever a time when I'm bluntly honest, it's now! I just can't say enough about your work, I'm in complete awe.

The point of veiw you gave through Snape's eyes was, just wow. I can not put into words your amazing writing. The emotion was beautifully written, I could feel everything that Snape was, I swear my eyes got watery. It's also a good thing to put this in Snape's point of view because we never see much of his view. I'm just in love with this chapter; in total and utter bliss.

Hope I rasied your ego a bit, even though I didn't mean to. 10/10

Author's Response: Being uber-critical of my own work, I always find that there is still room for improvement, which keeps my ego in check. :)

This HAD to be written from Snape's POV. And I had to strike the right balance between regret and grief and anger and bitterness. Snape was a very flawed man, and though he regretted the fact that he relayed the information about the Prophecy to Voldemort which in a way caused Lily's death, he was still very cruel to Harry. So depicting Snape in an entirely positive light wouldn't have worked. There is a lot of bitterness, anger and even some self-pity, but above all is the overwhelming remorse he feels. I wanted to capture that essence, and hopefully I've succeeded in doing so.

Thanks so much for the wonderful review and I'm so glad you enjoyed the story :)


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