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Review:Love Made Visible says:
Hey there, it's Love Made Visible from the forums :)

First off, I'd just like to say how much I loved it. There really isn't anything I can say to improve here, it was wonderful. It was poignant, extremely poignant which I feel is important in these sort of one-shots. Your descriptions were immense, I hardly knew there were so many things to describe about one person, it was inspiring! I think you got completely into Harry's head, highlighted how much he loved her, you poured every emotion he felt into your writing and I think it paid off beautifully. The love he felt for her was obviously so strong and you're obviously a very strong writer, well done.

I've never been a fan of Harry/Hermione, but I think this one was beautiful. There's something about Harry's desperation that makes me want to scream at Hermione to come back, you know? There's something in the innocence of Harry that makes me love it so much.

You've written this amazingly, there's really nothing else I can say other than carry on writing such beautiful stories!

Sophie X

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