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Review:rachm34 says:
wow! I loved your use of only description. This is a very good thing you tried because you will be able to work on your strength of your story without the dialogue. This was beautiful. I think you did a well done job! There were a couple of places where i wondered what was going on but i realized what happened when i reached the end. Very great job. I think you did a good job with this. Although being a fan of your use of dialogue i enjoyed this as well!

*Here i would put the words you say to me in Japanese but i forgot them!*

:)

Great job and keep on writing

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. In response to what you said in your review thread, the reason why I didn't 'explain more' what was happening is because I wanted the reader to pay attention. The way I see it, people whisper not because they want their voices to be quiet, but because they want to make sure the other person is listening. That's the effect I was going for with the reader. I hope you understand. Thanks for the great review! ^_^

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