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Review:bexi_potter says:
AHH! Finally! I've missed this story :(

I can't believe Remus did that! Well, I can, but you know what I mean. It' s just so sad. Completely believable as well though, I could imagine Remus doing exactly that if he were young and a werewolf and in love etcetera. It's just so damn believable that you'd expect it to be in the book, you know?

And your writing is still so amazing. I really love your style.

Also, just one thing? At the end, you spelt "brake" wrong, in this instance it would be "break". Just thought I'd point that out because I'd want someone to do the same for me.

I loved it so bad. I cannot wait until you post the next one. Please do it soon :)

And I don't know why, but I loved this line:

"And then the music starts playing and she tosses her arms around him and kissed him back as if that was what she'd been waiting for the whole time?" Caus movies totally do that. It's cute, sometimes. Others it can be a bit dodged and way too sappy.

10/10! UPDATE SOON! :)

-becky

Author's Response: Ah, becky, I thank you greatly. After I send Chapter 16 into validation I'm planning on going through and editing EVERYTHING to death, so thank you loads for pointing that out. It makes it easier to find the mistakes. Haha.

Next chapter was sent to validation last night, so hopefully you'll be seeing it very soon. xD

I'm thinking you'll like it. I liked it. xD


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