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Review:demongurl says:
Back from spain...WOO! but i loved it there..didn't run into any of your guys though, lucky me. Anyway, I don't think this chapter was as good as your previous ones and I was sensing that you had a bit of a issue with writing it, it just didn't seem as...I can't find the word...um...heartfelt (?) as the others? Do you get what i mean? But it was still good. Good on John (in a way) for doing what Jack wanted him to do, the two were so sweet together (not in a gay way) and It must have been so difficult. Anyway, I'm off to get some sleep and/or have a bath. Will update later hopefully, I have some fun stuff planned for TNG

Author's Response: Hey. Yeah this chapter was a lilttle bit harder to write. I threw three brand new characters into the mix and... well... what Jack asked wasn't the easiest thing... the whole bit with Jack was tough... I was debating whether or not to do it, then I was trying to figure out how... to much second guessing... anyhooters, I updated last night, it should be up soonish... thanks for the review.

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