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Review:SpringTime says:
It wasn't bad at all, write very well. I personally am not a Harry/Lavender fan, but that's mostly because I don't really like good ole Lav Lav very much. You have captured both of their personalities very well though the kiss was rather sudden, and I kind of felt that it came out of no where, maybe a little more build up to that point... just a suggestion though. There were also maybe two mispesllings or typos, nothing major, just thought I would point it out.
I hope that this helped, thanks for asking :)

Author's Response: Lav Lav! she's not my fave character lol, can't wait to see her in HBP lol. But I thought I'd give her a go, don't know where I got the idea for this ship from lol.

The kiss was a bit random, all to do with the situation they were in rather than any real feelings, as I didn't want a soppy ending where they suddenly declared feelings for each other lol.

Thanks so much for taking the time to review, I'll check back over this for the typos etc!

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