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Review:RoseLolly says:
Ooh. This seems like a pretty promising beginning =) Nice, comfortable introduction to the girls. Not much information, but pleanty enough to get an easy grasp on them. I much prefer it to something hideously over-detailed =) Heads can put pieces together etc. Haha.

Anyway. It's nice to have a Longbottom main, she seems like a lovely protagonist so far. I like the realism you've managed to already poke into this, into her, already.

I don't have any critique, becasue I really liked it, and er, thought you deserved a review. I can't wait to read more, it'll be nice to have an Albus/OC story to read, I've only really stumbled across James (ll) or Scorpious/OCs when it comes to the second gen. Anyway.

That's me. Being done.

-Rose.

Author's Response: Hello!

I'm glad that you liked this chapter and thought that the introductions were okay. I have to agree, I generally dislike it when intros are overdetailed. Hehe, and I like making you guys think a little bit.

I'm glad that you like Daphne. She's a lot like me in some ways and I was trying to make her identifiable to a lot of people.

Thanks for reviewing! Good luck finding New Generation stories. I have a couple of others if you're intersted. Thanks again!

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