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Review:Anna_Black says:
Intriguing... I like it! This chapter had a slower pace but was just as good as the first one. I especially liked the way you described the relation between Freya and Scarlet, the way Scarlet was to make Freya believe her everything she said. But Scarlet's questioning at the end about the whole plan they had kept secret from Freya makes me wonder if she'll eventually give up and tell Freya everything. That would be a nice twist! haha

And I already like Edward. He seems brave and a good character but I guess we'll see that in later chapters. He is a Man, right?

So, if the whole pact is honoured, as in, Men, (Wizards?), Elves and Dwarves unite, I wonder how will that happen, what with the dispute between the Elves and the Dwarves, lol!

I am also very curious about Salazar as he is the only Founder that hasn't appeared yet.

Well, this is a really interesting story and I think it is really sad that you have so few reviews here. This has a lot of potential: the story line, the naration... everything fits so well!

This is going to my favourites and can't wait for an update! :D

Author's Response: Why thank you. (:

Yes, it would make a nice twist wouldnt it? But, who knows.. Scarlet could tell Freya and be too late to change things or she could tell her and set everything into chaos. ;)

Yes, Edward's a Man. A lovely lovely lovely man in my opinion.

Salazar will play a bigger part in later chapters. Right now, explaining everything with Freya, Scarlet and the Founders is quite important.

Thank you! Oh yes.. Few reviews do sadden me but hey, haha.

:o Wow! Thank you!

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