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Review:o.i.p. says:
omg this story has sooo much potential! first of all props for such a creative idea...this really reminds me of the scene in HBP i think when slughorn brings the potion in and harry's reminded of ginny and hermione of ron. while i feel this story has a great foundation i think it would be even better if this potion were the reason Lily/James got together in the first place.it's a bit of a waste to use such a good idea (love potion) to reinforce the status quo...in your story nothing really changes, but if this potion were the cause of the change, it would definitely make the story more interesting and eventful. and hey, we all want that, right? that's just what I think about it; you may or may not have time/want to rewrite. also, i was a little confused about why james would smell like roses?? hmm.

i would like to end with another rave on this wonderful plot idea! i would so love if you would consider my suggestion, but of course it's your story.

Author's Response: Have re-written this, and will be posted shortly.
Thanks for reveiwing,
-Holly

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