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Review:ButterflyRogue says:
Now that I'm re-reading all of the chapters we have in the collaboration so far, I just can't help it but to be absolutely amazed by the quality of every single one of them. This chapter was no exception.

I love how you've given an entirely new dimension to the character we know so little about. You've given Charity a character and a backstory and you've done an amazing job with it. I love how you've described her relationship with her sister, the circumstances that made them drift apart, but also their special connection that brought them back together eventually. It was great how you've made a foundation for her affection for Muggles and her motive to become a Muggle Studies teacher - her love for Paul and for the way of life her sister was forced to live, a life Charity grew fond of and the life she secretly wanted to live herself.
It's beautiful (although sad, when I remember what will happen to her later) how her wish to secure a better future for her nephew gave her the courage to write and post that letter. Despite it foreshadowing her death, this chapter gave away the feeling of tranquility. It was very refreshing and amazingly written.

This is truly wonderful, very poignant piece of writing. It was an absolute pleasure reading it.. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I apologize for being late in responding to your lovely review! I've always found Charity to be a fascinating character and I'm pleased I was able to give her some dimension in a relatively brief chapter. I'm especially gratified that you enjoyed reading it because I certainly value your opinion highly! I appreciate the time you took to read and leave a review. It made my day!

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