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Review:chiQs09_II says:
Aww...I've read this before already and even left a review. I can't believe you lost it (and all your other reviews) after the server crash. :'(
Anyway, I'm back again.
I've actually never read a Sirius/Lily before that I've enjoyed so much like this. Or even a story in the viewpoint of a ghost that was perfectly written. It seemed realistic, with Sirius' sudden death when hit by the Killing Curse and then him falling through the veil... And when he couldn't remember who he was and what had happened. But somehow he was able to keep the memories that were most important to him, for example, he remembered Lily. By trying to make connections of what he could remember from his life, for example, 'pain' and 'joy' and 'laughter', he tried to remember her and why she was so familiar.

It must be like dying twice when he finally remembered why he had lost Lily: She was pregnant with James' child. :( *loves such stories*

But at least they reunited after death, right? She chose him then...

Author's Response: It was very sad to lose the reviews, but it did give me the chance to do a few edits to the story. Thank you for coming back to review it again, Mitch. ^_^

lol! Sirius/Lilys are one of those iffy ships, which perhaps makes it more interesting to write, seeing if I can persuade myself to enjoy the pairing. :P I'm really glad that you liked how it turned out - it is a very weird story, with all the fragments of Sirius's memory floating about.

This is probably the only happy ending I've written. :S They had to get together by the end of this story, otherwise it would have been a horrible way to punish Sirius. I wanted him to be happier in death than he was in life, and with Lily choosing him now, he has that opportunity. ^_^

Thank you very much for this review, Mitch. It means a lot that you enjoyed this story, and your comments are always so interesting to read. ^_^


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