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Review:RoseLolly says:
Oh, wow. Second chapter. I remember I was really fascinated by the first...Anyway =) Gabriel was so much more, acessable to me in this. I know people change when they're in company, but this was really interesting, to see him in a different light.

I feel sorry for Pricilla, she sort of caught the brunt of Slytherin-y-ish-ness there. But, that's another characterisation point I love, your OC-he makes a rather lovely Slytherin. Not, lovely lovely. You understand me, don't you? Lovely because he's an actual Slytherin. Er, yes. I'm feeling my most articulate just now.

Anyway. I really do love this, the gentle lines strewn throughout hinting of his rain thing. It really sets something for his inner workings.

I'm certainly intrigued all over again, to see how things switch from Lily to James, and Severus-Good characterisation there again, too...

-Rose.

Author's Response: Hi! I love your reviews XD glad to se you still like the fic. I was going to put it in the Author's Notes that the feel would be different from the first chapter since so many people seemed to like the 'angsty dramatic' pace it had. It did have an idea of how it would progress and Gabriel's personality when he's around others. Glad you noticed it :D Lol don't worry, I understand what you mean. I dont want him to be too nice because he's a Slytherin but at the same time he's not really 'cruel'. I'm glad he's likeable because he and Pricilla re my very first OC's. The rain is definitely an important piece heh. Lily and Sev are my little side piece but I cant give too much away *hugs*"

Kay~

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