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Review:ButterflyRogue says:
Oh, this was such an endearing chapter!! You wrote Luna so well!
Her thoughts seemed to flow so naturally, you've really managed to get into her head.

I loved the Moonshine parallel, it was a very nice touch. As well as her mother's name being Sol. The Sun and the Moon. :)
I also loved all of the descriptions you've included. Luna's special connection with nature through her mother was so wonderfully described and, in a way, it left her with a sort of a connection to her even after she died. I love the way you've started and finished with a motive of a forest - it really brought things back full circle.
Speaking of her mother's death, it's a great choice of a defining moment! I don't think you could have chosen a better one.

And the ending is so bittersweet and optimistic in such a "Luna" way... :) It is so like Luna to find a bright spot in such a tragedy and embrace the thestrals even though most people are prejudiced against them because of their looks and because of what they represent.

This was an amazing chapter and a wonderful contribution to our collab. I enjoyed reading it very much... :)

~Vedrana (Rosie Nymphadora on eHPF)

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