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Review:limelight1816 says:
Hey DoraTonks14!

Thanks for entering my challenge and writing such a wonderful story in response.

I loved reading this. I have no constructive criticism to offer and reallly, this story was awesome.

Amycus' feelings were so well-written. Their love and affection was wonderful to read about and this is quite a contrast to what little we read about them in the books. But again, there was so little that this is totally believable.

My favorite part, was where Alecto cackles when Dumbledore's about to be killed. She sure can hold a grudge huh? But I have a question: why did Alecto's father remove her from Hogwarts but let Amycus go? You didnt provide a reason for that.

The length was very satisfactory and the title was relevant too. The end was really touchy and I just loved it (I might have mentioned that before . . . )

It was really fantastic and I can go on telling you about every little thing I liked in the story but I fear I'll put you to sleep.

You can have a look at the challenge thread to see the results. Once again, awesome job!

-limelight1816

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just checked it, and I cannot believe I won. It is such an honor. Thank you very much! :D

I'm glad you liked it so much. But I did leave out the part about why her dad took her out of school. I kinda did that one purpose, because this is told from Amycus's point of view and he doesn't really know. But I can see how that would be confusing. I might try and add a little bit to that when I get some time. :)

Ah, I don't even know what to say except that I am grinning from ear to ear right now. Seriously this just made my day. I'm so happy that you think this story is worthy of first place. :)

Thank you for reviewing! Thanks so much for all the compliments!

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