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Review:REKNOWNED says:
Why would you say this was boring; it really wasn't. The story is interesting and written very well.

I like Albus' characterization. He seems so very sad and lonely right now. I know that can happen sometimes when you come from a large family but it's still sad.

I am actually surprised more of his extended family was not mentioned; I would think that they would at least be background characters.

Your writing is really mature and I can't wait to read more.
10/10 naturally!

Author's Response: Well, it IS boring compared to the rest of the story - there's a lot of action, about 50 different subplots and basically, something is always happening. This chapter is very different from the rest of the story, as it's close to that border where Albus's life changes completely, but doesn't really hit it. This is just a "before" preview, and it's all basically a description of Albus's dull life. Well, not to mention other mistakes that I'm working on correcting at the moment.
I have included family in the re-written version of the chapter (which is almost ready, thank God :D) - there's a bit about James and his girlfriend, a bit about Lily and Rose, and a bit about Harry and Ginny's rocky relationship (yeah, they don't really get along in my story :P). I didn't want to involve too many characters that weren't important, because I already have plenty of OCs to introduce and I think adding all of Albus's (unimportant in this story) relatives would kinda be too much to swallow. I'm just implying that he's neutral to all of them, more or less.
I'm glad you liked the chapter (and thank you for complimenting my style, I feel really flattered right now ^_^ *huge ego inflates and floats away*), and I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story even more. Thank you for the lovely review! ^_^

Huggles,
CJ


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