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Review:marinahill says:
i loved the start - you give loads of detail and describe perfectly the thoughts of someone in their last year of school - i'd imagine i'd feel like that if it was my last year. (gosh, that's next year though :|)

Also, how you showed James' thoughts about Harry realistically - i'm sure he'd always be worried about whether or not he is as good as his father, it's a lot to be burdened with.

As for the OC - eveline (love the name :) ) she seems lovely, but i felt she needed i little bit more description about her character, just to fill her out some more.

other than that it was a lovely chapter :) thanks for taking up my challenge!!

- Marina

Author's Response: thanks so much for the challenge! i enjoyed writing a different ship out of my comfort zone. i'm glad you liked the story =D

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