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Review:Labby says:
It's Jason Mraz! I had to stop by and read this, since I absolutely love him (and I wrote a story using the same song - it's such an awesome fanfic song to use). I really liked the story line here and the confusion between Harry and Hermione. You really show the complexities of the relationship throughout the story and how it's really killing them to be hiding it from Ron. I just think you might be relying on the song a bit too much. The story was really good, but if you expanded some of the sections between the lyrics that could definitely make this story even better than it already is. I really liked this though!

Author's Response: :) I love him, too! I'm actually going to see him in concert in December. I can't wait!! :) I've listened to this song over and over, and I kept telling myself I need to write a fic on this. And so I did. You're right. It is definitely an awesome fanfic song to use. :) I'll have to stop by and read yours someday.

Thank you for your comments, as well as your criticism. Both are always greatly appreciated. :) I see what you're talking about, where I could have expanded some more of the sections, but at the same time, I was also trying to convey how those lyrics were his thoughts. So although I could have possibly written more in between the verses, I also didn't want to stray too far away, since that was what he was thinking in his mind at the time. haha Did that make sense? Either way, I'm glad you liked my story. Thank you again for your review. :)


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