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Review:amieharry_ginny says:
First is first when i first read the title a huge grin spread across my face because i have never read a Arthur/Molly story and i was really excited in reading this and Merlin! This was even sweeter than i expected. *huggles*

"Molly who wobbles" How innovative and sweet. I mean they are actually cute but this story was super super super super cute. Your writing is pretty good but i found few grammatical mistakes like when Arthur says “What can I do you for?” i think you meant "What can i do for you?" You may want to check that. apart from that i loved this story. Cutest first kiss in your series so far. Million out of ten lol

Amie

Author's Response: Just like you'd never read one, I'd never written Molly/Arthur, aside from appearing in my other stories briefly. I'm so glad that for my first story with them I tackled their Hogwarts years.

I wanted to show similarities that linked them to how they are portrayed by Harry, so I included the nickname, Arthur's useless Muggle facts (about Christmas in this story), and Molly's boldness. I tried to stick to canon as much as I could :)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm so thrilled you're reading all my stories :D


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