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Review:amieharry_ginny says:
Again this was cute. I could imagine James doing something like that for Sirius. But it was not better than your other stories because it didn't seem very realistic to me ... because i always imagined J/L to be constantly fighting and so i imagined that "out of the blue" kisses Lily after which she falls in love with him. But still that's what i think. Still i'm not saying this is bad it's actually pretty good. Good job 9/10

Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted to sort of change what they were a bit, so I played with them a little. I don't see them as constantly fighting, per se... I see it being more of James trying to constantly show off in front of Lily to impress her. Lily just wasn't fond of it :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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