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Review:Anastasia says:
I found your reply to my previous review interesting. I didn't intend to make you feel bad; I mostly just wanted to point out where you needed to improve. I do commend you for taking the time to post something, however I would recommed that you take a little bit more time reviewing your writing before you post it. A little editing can go a long, long ways! Also, I understand that you only have two chapters posted so far, and thus have a tad more leeway in regards to character develpment; however, in reading your story I find that neither Draco or Hermione (especially Hermione) are true enough to their characters in the books to be entirely beliveable. Their characters are depicted a tad shallowly (again, especially Hermione) and for future chapters I would suggest exploring their complexities a bit more. In no way to I mean stick to the dimensions set out in the books though - there is no problem with making a character your own and giving them original or "undiscovered" traits, I just feel that you should make both of them more well rounded. Finally, don't just balk at me when I tell you that your writing isn't "stellar, moving or well-written" - so far it has not been! But in any case, don't just sit there, tell me I suck and then turn out more pith - take my advice and wow me!!!

Author's Response: I look back on this from three years ago, and I want to thank you. For not only the advice, but for putting up with my younger attitude. I'm still writing a bit, check out my most recent story, "Watching You.", I belive I've improved. Again thanks for reviewing.

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