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Review:Joanne K says:
Not a bad starting chapter. I liked your use of imagery, you use descriptions well. I thought James and Sirius were perfectly in character. I liked your characterisation of Kailee too, I immediately could tell what kind of person she was within the first few sentences of meeting her. I do wonder where Peter is in all this though, is there a reason why he isn't going on the vacation too?

Author's Response: thank you for your nice review.
As to your question why Peter isn't with them.. well i don't like peter. hahaa. i don't really consider him part of the group, so I'm not going to bother to put him in the story. Just imagine he's off on a vacation with Voldy. =D


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