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Review:Joanne K says:
This was such a nice little one-shot about Myrtle. I loved your different take on the whole situation, I don't think I've ever seen a fic before that has Myrtle dating Tom.

I picked up on a couple of mistakes:

"There fist date" - should have been 'their' rather than 'there', and 'first' rather than 'fist'.

"The never of that boy not answering" - should be 'nerve' rather than 'never'.

Other than those minor errors (which anyone could easily make and overlook - I do it myself) I think you write well. Not many people write about Myrtle, but if you're interested I also have a one shot about Myrtle that was inspired by CoS (although completely different to yours).

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing...And I will defently look up your fic...Thank you for picking up on the mistakes...I never noticed.Thanks again for the review! :)

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