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Review:long_live_luna_bellatrix says:
That was so great!!! I loved it! You captured Sirius's personality VERY well, the same for James. The scene with Lily in the train was also very good, matched the book, which I liked. I could see JK imagining the same scenes you did, from turning bogeys to beans to calling the hat a git. Also, it was brilliant how you slipped in James wanting to be a Chaser! You got every little detail, like that, which I loved.

You may want to consider changing Alice's name, though. It was a little confusing because Alice Longbottom must've been around in Sirius's year, too. But no biggie.

Otherwise, this was SO great!!!

Author's Response: Ahaha I'm really happy that you enjoyed this! This is exactly the way I picture James and Sirius as little 11-year-olds.

Actually, Alice was a Prewett when she was a girl. She wouldn't have been a Longbottom until she married Neville's dad, Frank Longbottom. So that was me sticking to canon :)

Thanks so much!

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