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Review:searching17 says:
At first I thought that you were just rewriting stuff from the 7th book, but then point of views and things changed, making it more interesting. Since the majority of the Harry Potter books is from Harry's point of view, it was nice to hear Hermione and Ron saying things that Harry could not hear, like when Hermione said, "wow." after the kiss.

A very good one-shot, it really delves into Ron and Hermione's relationship and how they finally got together, and how their emotions are just like their readers ("Finally!") 10/10!

~Estrella

Author's Response: I wanted to stick to canon, but I also wanted to give their kiss a very unique view. If I could have JK write any one scene in all the books from a view other than Harry's, it would be Ron and Hermione's kiss from either of their POVs. I really regret that we don't get that :( I refuse to stick just to what Harry may have heard/seen, too, so I gave them their own dialogue :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing!!


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