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Review:searching17 says:
Oh my god. I loved this! It totally explains Arthur's nickname for Molly - Mollywobbles! That was genius - adding that in! Okay, I'll calm down now *takes deep breath*.

I loved the characterization of Molly, the nervousness and trying-to-think-shut-up-other-part-of-my-brain part of her really connected with who she is now. In other words, I can see her growing into Mrs. Molly Weasley. Great job on that! :]

I also loved this part:
Molly knew her brothers would give her hell for even thinking of talking to him, but that wasn’t what Molly wanted anyway.
It reminded me of Ginny and her six brothers, and how they are all overprotective of her, just like Molly and her brothers. It's very sweet.

I loved this one-shot. It's on my favorites! And I must say, I'm starting to get addicted to your First Kiss series! 10/10.

~Estrella

Author's Response: Your review left me feeling warm and bubbly - thank you so much!!

I'm glad you liked the nickname - I didn't think of putting it in until a bit later (after I had already started writing), but once the idea came to me I just had to add it. Molly was so embarrassed when Harry overheard Arthur call her Mollywobbles, so I invented a humorous moment to go along with an adorable nickname.

I can't tell you how excited it makes me to know that you can see her growing into Mrs. Weasley. I tried to include little bits of canon-like material that would help to suggest it, so I'm glad it worked :)

I see a connection between Ginny and Molly as well, and I have to admit that I've always wanted a brother. I just had to include them in a mention :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

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