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Review:searching17 says:
Aww this was so cute! There were some points where I was ready to object to Lily or James' behavior, but you added things in like "Lily was surprised also at her response." and stuff and made me go on without any objections. So kudos on tying up all the loose ends! I think that the characterizations of Lily and James were perfect. Really, they were. Great job on that!

I also really liked this part:
As she sat down, she heard a male voice say in her ear, I always wondered what Id have to do to get you on my lap.

A very short and sweet one-shot, also, I really like your series name (The First Kiss Series) - it's very cute! 9/10.


Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to show that Lily and James were in such a different situation than any they'd been in before, so they were acting more on impulse than actual thought. Sometimes you find yourself doing/saying something you never thought you would!

I wanted to add the humor, and I'm actually very proud of the moment you mentioned, haha :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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