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Review:searching17 says:
Did all the Marauders and Lily and her friends make Prefect? Then who made Headboy and Headgirl? Lol sorry for the many questions.

One more thing I must point out, in this part:
“I apologise for being, what I can only call a “party-pooper”” there was a quiet bout of laughter at this, “but I’m afraid I have to ask Mr Black to end his little production in order to introduce you to out new First Year.”
I think that at the end, it should be "to our new First Years" instead of "to out new First Year." :] Don't worry, we all make mistakes.

I liked the part where she compared the Triwizard Tournament to the love triangle with her, James, and Lily, though it seems to me that she doesn't have much of a chance with him. But I cannot wait to see where this story goes! Please update soon. :] 8/10.


Author's Response: Ah, you will find out about Head Girl and Head Boy later on, and no, they did definitely not all become Prefects, don't worry!

Thanks for picking up on the typo, again, I'll edit when I can! :)

I'm glad you picked up on the fact that she has no chance - because it's true. Lily and James are meant for each other, and she knows that - at least, you'll come to understand that if you read on. But sometimes, for some unknown reason, people can see something in others we can't - and hopefully, you'll understand what I mean later on.

Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

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