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Review:DJjazzyCarlton says:
Aw, poor Sophie! You do an especially good job of displaying emotion in this chapter. You had a lot of variety in your tone but at the same time, kept it consistant. I love the way you're portraying James and Sophie seems like a very interesting character; I'm eager to learn more about her. Their (James's and Sophie's) interactions are very well written. You also do a good job with all of the other characters you've introduced so far in the story. The Weasleys and the Potters are all characterized very well and you've made it very believable. I love Hugo so much!

Wonderful job on this chapter and I'm moving on to the third!

Keep it jazzy,
DJjazzyCarlton

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I really have fallen in love with the characters in this story, young and old. I'm investing something in all of them, I wanted to create real personalities as well as portraying the characters we already know. I'm glad I'm being successful!

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