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Review:DJjazzyCarlton says:
Wow! This was a really exciting chapter! A lot of times, the first chapters in a story are really slow-moving because you have to set the story up properly. But you've done a great job introducing your story and making it exciting from the very beginning. The ending was just as brilliant as the beginning in this chapter. It was cliffhanger-ish which delights and angers me because I'm dying to know what happens next but I love that I'm intrigued. Good thing the next chapter's already up or else I think I'd have a fit ;)

Good job on this first chapter and I can't wait to read on!

Keep it jazzy,
DJjazzyCarlton

Author's Response: I'm really happy you found this chapter exciting. I personally find it hard to get into a story because the first chapters are always getting the story going. I wanted to charge in and have a balance between plot flow and keeping it interesting for the readers.

Thanks for the review!


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