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Review:Anastasia says:
You shouldn't catagorize a story as a one-shot if it has more than one chapter. Unless of course you originally wrote a one-shot and then got such rave reviews or such an amazing bout of inspriation that you just had to write a continuation. I can plainly see that you had neither. Your writing needs quite a bit of polishing, your grammer is abhorrious and you switch point of views all over the place. Your story also lacks the amount of depth I would require to consider this a well written story. Overall I think you have potential, and I commend you for trying, but if you want better reviews, don't just ask for them - earn them through such a stellar, moving and well written story that demands good ratings.

Author's Response: Well ummm...confused at how to respond to this it is dissapointing,yet it tells me where to improve.and I know that I am absolutly no good right now,i'm trying to get better...obviously it's not working though.Sorry that my story is not "stellar,moving or well writen"as you say i just put some thing up and hoped for the best!Ummm...thanks but no thanks.

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