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Review:HarryPotter is my LIFE says:
Of all of the stories of yours (that I have read so far) this is my favorite. I think it exibits the most reality, the most description, and the most consistant prologue. (Others were too fast, or too packed with information.)

One Thing: ". . .Oh well, I at least know that it can't be James Potter!""

It seems to be just a little too perfect that the one person Lily thought couldn't be the Head Boy, was the Head Boy. The whole scene/sentence was fine without that addition.

Other than that, I love the scene at the Potter's house, where you show that Sirius is very much loved and part of their family.

Totally looking forward to reading on.

Also, I wanted to use this review to ask what your username on the forums is because I searched your penname and nothing came up. I also wanted to know whether you wanted a slightly nicer picture of Helen Bonham Carter (since Bellatrix seems to be portrayed in a nicer way in Arabella.) And keep in mind that I can always change it if you don't like it.

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