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Review:HarryPotter is my LIFE says:
I decided that in order to get the feel for the banner, I was going to read your stories first. I like the story so far (I'm a sucker for the Marauders Era.) I just have a few questions and suggestions. (Hey, that rhymed.) :D

Question: Why is it that you don't Esme Squalor? Is she a character from another story? (Twilight, perhaps?)

Also, there's lots a dialogue, not too much description, and everything is moving quite fast. While you're writing, take a breath, relax, and try to place yourself in the scene. Give some more imagiery - physical characteristics, facial expressions, and anything going on in the background as well.

Like I said, good start.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Oh and Esme Squalor belongs to Lemony Snicket in the Series of Unfortunate Events.
THank you for the advice!

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