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Review:dramaqueen6 says:
Hey there! Here I am with your review, sorry for the major slack-age and taking far too long!

1. First of all, on your summery there are two sentances at the end that start with 'I suppose' and while that's fine, on the second one I think you should say 'i suppose you could also say' instead of just 'you could say' because it brings up the issue of that it was also the end too.

2. Okay so I really liked all of the portrayal of the family relationship at the beginning. It worked really well about how Rose woke him up to his being his father's use to voice his beliefs on pure blood and blood traitors. The constant show of the struggle between the father and his son was done wonderfully. The writing was magnificent.

3. "If I hadnít been foolish enough to love RoseÖ if only I had listened to my father..."

This was the one line that I didn't like. It was almost as if you were contradicting the whole story before this line. It said to me that he regretted ever being with Rose, and I don't think it should have been about regret at all. I don't know, the wording of it just made me frown and go 'well that's awful!'. I just don't think the wording of it was right...I don't know how else to explain it. If I'm making no sense to you, I'm sorry!

Though I didn't like that one part, I really did like the whole of the story, and I especially loved the sadness shown through Rose's death. It was tragic, but it really made the story in the end. I loved it, so nice job on the over all feel of the story. Very beautiful.

-dramaqueen6

Author's Response: I see what you mean about that line, I'll revise it :) thanks for the help.



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