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Review:CheleCooke says:
Hi there.
Firstly, I would like to congratulate you on your characterisation of Luna. Lots of people just make her insane, and then the other half don't make her odd enough. Your ability to have her so close to how she was in the books is great.
Secondly, this line 'It was the perfect day to mock his misery.' is fantastic. I really like it. What is it about funerals in bright sunshine? It really is cruel.

Luna patting Harry on the head was just classic! The misguided thought that it would bring comfort, but really probably made Harry think 'what the hell are you doing?' - brilliant.

There were a few grammatical mistakes, but I'm very sorry, I can't remember where they are. So they didn't really take away from the story. Just take a look and it'll make it even better.

I liked the ending. The fact that we have no idea what the note said, so we figure it out for ourselves. (people have been telling me some odd things because I did it in my story Retsis, but I like it)

This was nice. I'm not a big fan of the non canon pairings, but this one is done very sweetly.

CheleCooke

Author's Response: I write Luna a lot, she's a difficult character to get right, so I'm glad my characterisation of her is improving!

It always seems wrong to have bright sunny days when someone has died, I agree. It does sometimes seem like the universe is going against you in all ways lol.

I'll take another look through and see if I can spot the mistakes, I might not be able to as my grammar isn't the best lol.

Thanks so much for taking the time to review I appreciate it!

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