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Review:Ollie Vander says:
Wow, I really liked this. It's refreshing from all the romance and angst. The character intrigues me, I want to find out more about her. (I feel it's a her...am I right?) I would be willing to read anything else about the life of this character, especially the way you wrote it.

My only critism is that you use a bit too many sentance fragments. Now, I understand that the thoughts of our hero(in) are a bit choppy, but you probably could have combined.

I really enjoyed this. It was short and simple, but entertaining.

Pray tell me; is this a canon character, ie Hermione, or a original?

Nice job!

Author's Response: thank you for both the praise and the criticism. i think it is a her. I'm not entirely sure who she is, actually, but probably not a canon. personally i can't imagine Hermione or anyone else from the books of the top off my head acting like this woman. if you're lucky i might do some more with this character, i enjoyed writing her but i can't be sure yet. I'm glad you liked it though and thanks for reviewing.
Dilys :)


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