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Review:RubySky says:
First of all, I want to say I'm sorry that it took me so long to review this. School is keeping me very busy lately. But now, lets get to your review:

I'm a huge fan of Regulas/OC stories, and the ship itself, so I
was very biased to like this before reading it. But luckily, I
didn't need to be biased because this is very good anyway :)

The spelling is very good, and the grammer is as almost as good as the spelling. The pace of the story is very good as well, you can keep it in line with the whole chapter. The chapter itself was a nice lenght for one chapter because you got to the point of the story without losing some description in the story while you did so. The letter format was also, a very clever idea to write the chapter in.

The characterisation of Regulas is very good. Since we don't get a detailed characterisation of him in the books, we created one for him in the fandom, but either way, you matched your characterisation of him well to either one. You can him the correct emotions and thoughts you'd imagine he would be having if this happened it him.

My favourite part of the chapter was when Regulas and the girl he liked so much were staring at each other, and then she smiled. It was so well written, but so sad at the same time. And it shows you are good at writing the climatic scene.

Overall, I'd give this 10/10. I just loved it. It was writing so well and beautifully.

Author's Response: I know how it is; I've been pretty busy lately as well, sorry for the delay in response.

I've just recently discovered the interesting ship that's Regulus/OC, actually, but it does seem to be an intriguing one. Thanks for the great praise - I'm really glad that the characterisation of Regulus came across well either way.

Yep, this was for a title/banner challenge, and I figured that I'd center the whole story around the concept of "because she smiled" - I'd been a little worried that I went overboard with it, so thanks for the reassurance! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story, thanks again for the great review!

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