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Review:Lunicle says:
W.O.W. That was amazing writing and the plot had me completely sucked in. It was so suspenseful! I'm really impressed that you packed that much plot into a one-shot. It was really creepy too, but in the way it was intended to be, I think. ;) Really well done! I am glad I didn't read it at night though... guess I'm just not a big enough girl for horror. :D 10/10

Oh yeah, and I'm really picky about grammar type things, and I didn't spot anything in this! So well done on that too. Of course, that may be partly due to the fact I was totally sucked in to reading this. But I didn't see much out of place in your other stories either, so I doubt it./rambling

Again, amazing plot and amazingly done.

Reviewers, unite! Writers, write!


Author's Response: Hey thanks again for the very nice review. I pride myself on spelling and grammar and I just die inside when someone finds a mistake in one of my stories, so I'm glad that this is error-free.

This is a story that I really thought about and planned before writing, so that may be why it feels so tight, when I know that the plots of my hidden novella and my novel WIP are quite a bit looser.

I really wanted it to be horror with a darkly humorous twist at the end (pun intended).

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